Deviation Actions
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The tag word given to me is 'Fluffy', your gallery had quite a bit of entries that fit but ultimately I picked this one because I would like to offer some suggestions.
First I would like to say I love the color in this piece!
I looked through the first two pages of your gallery, and this piece just stood out.
I am not going to suggest changing anything about anatomy, the 'Lion scribble' drawn by you looks like a mixture of animals;
I see a mouse (the ears and general head shape reminds me of a mouse/cat),
a cat (the body has a cat like structure)
and squirrel ( the ruffling under neck and tail remind me of the bushiness of a squirrels fur).
I figure that wasn't your intention since you named the piece 'Lion scribble' but I like the outcome regardless.
Picture of a lion: animals.sandiegozoo.org/sites/…
Suggestions for the future?
I honestly cant tell what’s a highlight and whats a shadow with 100% accuracy. Once you define them, I would suggest taking the base color and then layering shades of that color. I felt that a piece you did earlier in 2015, April was more successful in terms of shadows and highlights (gullsko.deviantart.com/art/Swe…)
Now its your turn to visit MiMikuChair with the tag word ‘Cyan’.
They have quite a bit of comments already but I picked this one to demonstrate what I meant by layering shades of color – XD hopefully you find the one I was talking about!~
I would love to see the finished product of you re-draw this.